The main plot of the story is this. Abigail is watching a movie with her friend when she noted that being controlled is fine as long as the person loves you. She also says how she would do anything to be taken away to a magical world. After her friend leaves a boy (who is not seen) steals her away. She awakes in a forest and hears the boy speaking to her through her mind. He tells her to obey him. If she disobeys she experiences intense pain (best way to explain it is like a cruciatus curse being cast on you). Throughout her journey she meets many odd creatures ( not that important) and a girl named Grace (very important). At the end of the story she reaches the boy. She finds that he's in love with her. She denies him and he lets her leave. (This is only the gist of the story, there's a lot more to it) Anyway I am in desperate need of a subplot. Any ideas? It needs to be kept in limits. This is actually a movie script, but it is in no way going to an actual producer or anything of that sort. My friends and I want to make it (and we are but teenagers with no experience) so it can't be completely out of this world. Thank you for any ideas you may give.