So I'm working on a short story, and it's in the third person. There's only two characters and lots of dialogue and I'm having difficulty knowing where to put dialogue tags with names, tags with he/she or no tags at all. I made it easier on myself by making my only two characters boy and girl, so you know who 'she' is and you know who 'he' is. Here is an example of my writing (Completely made up here.): Now maybe it's just me, but I use a lot of 'he', 'she', 'her', 'him, 'Jennifer' and 'Jessie'. Are these noticable to the reader? Am I just noticing because I have to decide which term to use every time? Thoughts? ~ J. J.