"Will i stay or will i go?....Am I sane or am I crazy?. What world is this, What kingdom, What shores of what worlds????????????????????? It's a very big question your faced with, The choice of your life. How much will you indulge in your flaws? What are your flaws? Are they flaws? If you embrace them, Will you commit yourself for life?????????????????
Firstly, why the caps lock? It's attention-grabbing and shouty, I think it's bad form using them in this context. Secondly, please can you correct all your spelling and punctuation, as this is a writing forum. 'I' is always capitalised, there's no need for ten question marks in a row, however you do need to close the quotation. And thirdly, you need to attribute your quotes, so if this is a movie quote, please add the source (same goes for all the quotes on this forum).
