Here's the idea I've been toying with. Title: Those Who Fight Furthest (inspired by a Final Fantasy song, but has relevance to the plot) Plot: The protagonist, Zak, and his best friend, Lance, are around the age of 20. They return home after an outing one day and find that their village has been attacked, nobody left alive. They discover that it was the actions of Libero(last name), president of the organisation that runs the largest city and who's power reaches throughout the land. They head to his headquarters with revenge on their mind and whilst in the city run into an organisation who fight against Libero and his corrupt police force who unofficially run the city. They eventually make an attack on Libero's headquarters but are caught and thrown in jail. They overhear a conversation and discover that Libero is searching for an ancient artifact that will give him uncomparable power. They then escape and undergo a quest to stop him. This is the plot for the first book and I am planning a sequel. It contains sword fights, magic and obviously this idea posted is basic as if I were to post everything then I might as well post the whole novel . I appreciate any feedback on the idea.