Hey, I'm new here, but not to forum living - just wanted somebody's input on character names and details. Here are a few characters I've named myself and a short description: Rados Onklet - A nimbly built young man who was catapulted out of poverty to serve as an aide and adviser for a righteous King. Though well trained in the way of the sword and confident in his abilities, he often succumbs to unwarranted fear and cowers away from easily overcome confrontations. Oreo Hadron - The pampered prince of a vengeful nation, he leaves the comfortable care of royalty to venture the world in seek of truth's pertaining to his ancestors' transgressions. Though strong in his passion for justice, he is usually able to keep a cool head and reach his goals without excessive strain. Gall Ventaros - The descendant of a God-like race of beings and the King of a country which embodies peace and balance. Imbued with divine talents, he remains calm and intuitive in the most nerve-wracking situations and deals chivalry even unto the impossibly un-redeemable. Darian Orion - A prince to a vichy kingdom, he seeks revenge for the assassination of his father, the true king of his homeland. Wanting ever to only be a self-made man, he tries to avenge his father alone, but discovers no man is an island. He also struggles to overcome his avarice and lust for power, remedying this flaw by dismissing all prior knowledge of the dark arts he has come to know and love. Infeas Firek - A penniless adventure-seeking teen who braves the desert in search of his older brother to join in some of his exciting escapades. Infeas soon learns that the clan his brother is a part of consists of thieves and bandits, and he begins to understand that his desires will push him down a road he may have to become comfortable with. Regardless, he attempts and succeeds in joining the clan as well as overthrowing his brother, becoming the bandits' new leader. However, Infeas is told about his dismal future, and decides to start reforming the villainous sect of which he now rules. Ultimo Oblivious - The personal bodyguard to a sage and ruler of a mighty nation. He has devoted his life to protecting the elder and made it his sole duty. When a formidable enemy reappears and takes away the one thing he has sworn to defend, he becomes lost and loses his purpose. Only the friends he has made accomplish the task of bringing him back to reality, and he realizes that the true duty of an ally is to move on after their comrades have gone. These are, oh, but a few of the characters I have developed, and I haven't even begun to scratch the surface in these descriptions, but if anything off the bat strikes anyone one way or the other, please share your opinions / critiques / suggestions. Thanks!