My story is basically a Romeo and Juliet-type thing, please don't laugh. Two rival gangster families. Ramona and Devon have been flirting for years, but never go further than that. I want them to give in eventually, but I need a good reason why, after so long. They're supposed to despise each other, they can't let the other know they're in love, so they put on a front, if you know what I mean. I was never good at writing really passionate scenes. The only thing I can come up with is that Devon sees Ramona with someone else and just lashes out. She goes to see him later and so on, so forth... Any other suggestions would be most welcome.