need help with character personalities and dialogue

Discussion in 'Dialogue Development' started by Matt007, Mar 10, 2017.

  1. Simpson17866

    Simpson17866 Contributor Contributor

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    Hey, they's what us outliners are doing to ;) I asked Charlie if she wanted to be one thing, and she told me she wanted to be another thing.
     
  2. Pinkymcfiddle

    Pinkymcfiddle Banned

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    My character used to tell me what to do, but his demands became too vociferous. We battled each other on almost every plot point. One day, when I sat down at my desk, he said "if you stole some money, you could quit your job and we could spend all day together." At this point I knew I had to kill him off, but he did not go down easily, he stabbed in my hand with my own pen.
     
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    (One of the reasons why I like this forum is that you people often make me laugh out loud!)

    I'm not that drastic that I have to kill them off. When minors character start growing beyond their intended role I usually tell them to be patient and one day they'll have a sequel all to themselves. That usually quiets them down. :D
     

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