Updated I haven't checked in a while, and although I thank you for your input, the storyline's taken another turn. My story follows Salem Knight, a 14 year old with telekineses, particularly, biokineses. He's known he's had the ability ever since he killed his father in a bout of rage against him for abusing his sister, Cynthia. Cynthia can see the future. It's a not-so soft story because it follows an explanation. Thousands of years ago, people lived on Nexuses. Nexuses are places where ley lines, connections of supernatural energy, intersect. People living there possessed multiple psychic abilities because of that. One day, an oracle, the Oracle (of Delphi), to be exact, had a vision. Someday in the future, there would be a psychic with the ability to warp reality. She would be the catalyst towards the end. After that vision, psychics died out. The ley lines shifted, and there were barely any psychics left. Those that did have psychic abilities were limited to one, and it usually faded by adulthood. But enough about the past. His sister, Cynthia, gets a vision. The vision. The reality-warper is out there. And so begins the fight for Israel Fawn. The problem is, there are actual good and evil characters. I need some method of dividing them, though. There is only one organization for the psychics, Nexus. How would the evil psychics be defined? A different organization? What would they stand for? Errgh. Sorry for my questions, but it's better than reading the finished product with a bunch of plot holes.