I'm new here and I'm not sure if this thread goes here. Sorry if it's in the wrong place. So I've been writing this story where (i'm going to try and make this as short as possible) this girl gets pregnant by this guy that she hates due to them getting drunk and..yeah, but the guy is oh so madly in love with her to the point where he is pretty much a stalker. The girl is confused about how she really feels about the guy, often going from intense feelings of hate to maybe liking him. Anyhow, her ex best friend's ex husband (i know,confusing.) asked her out and she said accepted. (Her ex best friend cheated on him for the stalkerish guy that got the girl pregnant (drama!)) The ex husband is a really sweet guy and stuff...but I'm having doubts on whether they should stay together or not. And in addition to all that drama, the ex husband's psycho former girlfriend from before he got married came back and wants to be with him again. Naturally she's pissed that he just got out of a marriage and is already dating someone again (only cuz its not her he's dating) and will pretty much manipulate and and do whatever she can to break them apart. And if she doesn't break them apart maybe she'll get depressed and commit suicide or something, not sure, but I want the psycho ex out of the picture. And then there's the baby thing. I'm not sure what should happen to it, though I am leaning more to it dying only because that could possibly bring the girl and the guy she hates closer and maybe make the girl realize she likes him. THEN there's the question of how it's going to die. I'm thinking more of having it born prematurely so that it's lungs aren't completely mature yet and so it can't breath and dies soon after it's born. Is that too stupid? Also I'm thinking of adding even MORE drama to the whole thing by having the girl start flat lining right after the baby is born (I'm still not sure of what the reason could be, i need help with that too xD) and i don't know, maybe while she's technically dead she sees the psycho ex girlfriend holding her newborn baby and smiling wickedly and saying something along the lines of since she cant have the guy, she cant have the baby or something like that and leaves with it. Then the girl is brought back and everyone is all upset cuz they thought she was a goner and all that, and then she finds out that the baby is indeed dead just like the 'vision' or whatever you wanna call it while she was dead. (Also it's worth mentioning that the girl 'died' right after the baby was born. she never got to see it, so that's not what the 'vision' was caused by or anything) Yeah, so I need help with the stuff mentioned above. Also, is all of this too cliché (or more specifically, the part about the 'vision' thingy)? Also, general tips or advice would be GREATLY appreciated.