...thought? I didn't want to put that word in the title, 'cause I didn't want to open the gateway to claims that this is a repetitive thread. I guess my problem is that, nearly every time my character starts thinking something, I feel the need to treat it the same as I would treat a new line of dialogue. Is this the proper way to handle thought? Or should it just be thrown in with the rest of the narration? An examle: The top part needs some serious editing, I know. But, in reference to the second bit, which is where the thought comes in. It doesn't feel like it belongs with the rest of the narration. But is that incorrect? Should it, in fact, be tacked to the previous paragraph?