Hi , im new here, so hopefully this is the right thread to post this in XP. So i have this idea for a story. Its basically about this boy. He lives in this place where everything is perfect. The sky's are always blue with very little clouds, at night you can see every single star. The grass is green, flowers, birds, butterfly's, etc. This place is beautiful. He lives in a town where all the houses are like, small round hut things. Like.... Frodo's house from the movies. I saw them for ever ago, but i think you get the point . Anyways, this place is basically perfect. The people here do very little work, or very little hard work. The reason is because they have been making Golems to do their work for them for ages. So, the day when the story starts, there is supposed to be a meteor shower. But no normal meteor shower. There is going to be a BUNCH of shooting stars during this time, and it only happens every few hundred years. So during the day, while the main character is doing his things, i can introduce characters, and etc. During that time, i can explain how his mom was summoned by the Palace when he was very little, introduce characters, give the feeling for the peaceful setting, describe and show how the Golems are used by people, and have people talk about the upcoming meteor shower. So, at night, everyone in the town comes together, in the center of the town. They all watch the shooting stars. The night would be perfectly clear of course, so you could see all the stars. The main character would get distracted somehow, bored, or something, and walks away. While facing the direction nobody else is looking, he sees a star shoot down towards the ground. This is suuuuuuuper far away. this one is red though, and causes a silent red explosion in the horizon. The character would go off and tell all the towns people, but they would say that that happens sometimes, and it's ok. It causes no harm. The main character would say that this one was red, and such. The towns people would say that his eyes were just playing tricks. Everybody heads off to go to sleep. It super dark out, and the main character looks outside the window before he falls asleep. The golems he sees out the window are all standing straight up and looking out towards where the explosion happened. When the town wakes up, the Golems are gone. And now, things start to go poop. Right when they learn to fend for themselves with out the use of the golems, the missing golems return and attack the village. The main character and some of his friends escape, and now they have to stop the Golems and find what is causing all of this craziness. During that time, normal end of the world stuff would happen. War machines would be created, so pollution would fill the skies. More clouds, people attacking each other, people stealing, etc. Tell me what you think, or if you have any ideas to expand upon this idea! Thanks!