I wrote this for my daughter (Sophia) over the weekend. I have never attempted anything like this before, but once I started it really felt good putting my feelings down on paper. I haven’t shared it with anyone and I think the haven of anonymity that this site provides has given me the courage to share it with you. I am looking for kind constructive criticism because I really don’t know if it just sounds good to me because it is my own personal thoughts.
Hi Antonis, and welcome to the forum. I had to modify your post a little bit because we have some rules in place when it comes to getting your own work critiqued on this forum. Here's our New Member Quick Start Guide to get you properly started. -Kat