When Jenny screamed "Get the hell out of my house!" the whole neighborhood heard her. I don't think a comma is required after "screamed" here; do you agree? As a matter of fact, I think the sentence is perfectly fine as is without any commas. Agreed?
Wouldn't you need a : after screamed as it's a direct quote? So it should be: When Jenny screamed: get the hell out of my house; the whole neighborhood heard her. Or is that only in done in French?
When Jenny screamed for everyone to get the hell out of her house, the whole neighbourhood heard her. I'm in the process of learning a lot at the moment (my brain hurts); this is my understanding: reported speech does not have quote marks. So there would be no comma either. I added for everyone as I think we need to know who she was screaming at (this, of course, you may need to change). Dave