Hey all, So, in my current WIP, I've had to restructure the last third of the novel and do some rewrites. For some background info regarding the chapter I plan to write: MC loses her Mum and goes to pick up the ashes. Their relationship was unsteady, and this is hinted at throughout the book, however I want an extra punch - as it's the main time the MC is recognising the realism, and coming to terms with the grief. I am trying to experiment with writing the chapter without paragraph breaks, aiming to show a train of thought rambling session: much like a eulogy with zero preparation. I feel including breaks could disrupt the impact of the scene. (For clarification, the novel is written in 1st person.) Would this be too jarring for the reader, or is it dependant on the flow and engagement? Thank you in advance!