Open on a dream!?

Discussion in 'Plot Development' started by GuardianWynn, Aug 28, 2015.

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  1. cutecat22

    cutecat22 The Strange One Contributor

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    I don't know the details. I do know his local Oxfam shop stocked his book and filled both front (double fronted shop) windows with displays for him. Is he just lucky or savvy? I have no idea.
     
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    GuardianWynn Contributor Contributor

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    May I ask how you learned of this person? She seems nice. I watched a few more of her videos. lol
     
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    I was surfing youtube for writing advice and I found this:




    I went to her channel, watched all of her videos and looked at the related channels and that is where I found ellen brock.
     
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    Tenderiser Not a man or BayView

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    I've read a lot of the articles on Ellen's site http://ellenbrockediting.com/. I didn't watch the videos because I prefer reading text but she talks a lot of sense and has some great tips. Her main target audience seems to be middle-grade or YA writers so a lot of people on the forum will probably find her advice helpful.
     
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    What if, instead of incorporating dreams, the main character has waged a war with their subconscious? This is not a new idea but could potentially be more compelling to more readers whilst still allowing you to explore ideas that are not "normal" in the everyday life sense. A daydream may be more appropriate than a dream. Two stories that come to mind (different genre) are:
    1. The Double - Jose Saramago (book)
    2. Vanilla Sky (movie)
     
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    In this way the character could be conflicted. One side of her wants to use the powers, and the other side doesn't. This could be intriguing if done well.
     
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    I don't get what you mean by "Waged a war with their subconscious"
     
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    Yeah @GuardianWynn, why don't you just rewrite Vanilla Sky into your opening. That sounds like good advice.
     
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    Now I need to go watch Vanilla Sky so I know what it does. lol
     

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