Hello, I'm new here and wanted some advice. I'm currently working on a fantasy novel and I'm starting out with a landscape scene at night with a small action of a group moving through shadows. I'm trying to get the reader a sense of the barren rocky land and it's hazards. Also how tense the group is when followed by the enemy. I have re-written it a few times and probably more to come, but I think I need other peoples opinions on how to open a scene like this and is it alright to post what I have so far on the forums for people to read it?