this is a recent poem i have written reagarding important aspects of uk society. essentially my and many others opinions. i have a downloads file on my site containing my current 2011 project which is my ideas on updating christianity and how to improve the world by becoming closer to god.
Hi Faithfinder, and welcome. I'm sad to announce that this isn't exactly the place to post feedback requests (and I know this is the last think you want to hear from (what I expect you see as a) forum-snob), and that there is a set of rules regarding feedback requests. I expect the site moderator will outline them for you, but here they are anyway in a nutshell: you should be a member for at least 2 weeks, have at least 20 posts and at least 2 reviews of others' works. It would be unfair of me to them if I were to give you feedback on this now, so I won't. I hope this doesn't turn you down too much, and you still have a happy time here!
Exactly what Timothy said - but you're new, so it's understandable, but make sure you read the rules before you keep posting. Especially about the workshop requirements!! Welcome!
Hello Nick, Welcome to the Creative Writing Forums. Please read How to Use the Writing Workshop before you try to post there. Posting your own writing for people to comment on should not be among the very first things you do here anyway. It is worth taking the time to see what other people have done to improve their writing, and see if some of it applies to your writing as well. That is part of why we require members to review other members' work before posting their own for review. On the other hand, there are no restrictions, other than content and copyright rules, on showcasing your work in your member blog. Also, be aware that posting a piece of writing on any public site, including this one, will greatly diminish your chances of selling it for publication. Removing the writing later does not alter that fact - once posted, it is irreversibly considered published. So do not post anything more than a small excerpt of any piece you are planning to submit for publication. If you haven't explored the site yet, you should probably do so soon. Newcomers often gravitate to the Lounge, the Word Games, or the Writing Workshop, but there is much more to be discovered if you poke in the corners. Remember to check out our FAQ as well, and be sure to read through the forum rules, too, to avoid any misunderstandings or hurt feelings. Respect for one another is our principal mandate. As for the Writing Workshop, new joiners often wonder why we do things a bit differently on this site than on other writing sites. We emphasize constructive critique as a vital writing skill. Training your eye by reviewing other people's work helps you improve your own writing even before you present it for others to see. Therefore, we ask members to review other people's writing before posting work of their own. We also impose a two-week waiting period before you may post writing for critique, to give you time to become familiar with what is expected and how the site operates. The Writing Workshop forums on this site, therefore, are true workshops, not just a bulletin board for displaying your work (and on that note, please only post each item for review in one Writing Workshop forum). Also, please use the same thread for all revisions and additional excerpts from the same piece of writing. See this post, Why Write Reviews Before Posting My Work? for more information. And while you're looking around, don't forget to check out the RPG forum for improvisational fiction. Also try our Weekly Short Story Contest and Weekly Poetry Contest. They actually run more than one week apiece, but any member may enter, and all members are urged to vote for their favorites. Enjoy your stay here, and have fun!
