I sometimes feel like I make my paragraph`s too long. I can't help but compare myself to books I've read that all seem much better than anything I can write. Every time I begin to create a stage I find myself delving more and more into the details and minutia. I feel like I lose sight of the story and instead to us on the minor details almost as if I feel like I haven't explained it enough to convey my picture. I know I have this same issue in day to day life as well. Difficulty ending my explanation until I've said it three times. Id appreciate any advice that could help me maintain a straight and proper story going while still conveying a meaningful image and scene to my reader without boring them with the details Sorry I feel like I have even over explained or complicated this post. Any help or tips would be great, thanks!