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Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by hind11, Jan 12, 2009.

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  1. captain kate

    captain kate Senior Member

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    you can put it much simpler

    for example: Bob said, rolling his eyes.

    gets the same point across without tying down your dialogue and slowing the pace.
     
  2. ManicParroT

    ManicParroT New Member

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    I agree with Elmore Leonard, in the sense that I often see way too many clumsy dialogue tags in amateur writing. It's not an absolute rule - I remember reading Stephen Donaldson, and being quite impressed by some of his tags, without finding them intrusive - but I don't generally care for dialogue tags, and I avoid them like the plague.
     
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    sometimes you have to use them though

    Especially when you have characters that you don't want to introduce their name, or you want to wait halfway through a scene to give it. That's if you have a mysterious character, or one who is supposed to be 'dead.' Not something you normally want to do per se....
     
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    I try to use said 80% or so of the time, although I'll use other tags if I feel that they will convey the meaning better.
     

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