So, I'm in the middle of writing a spec-fic vampire novel. I say spec-fic because it's not really horror, it's kind of an urban-gothic-fantasy/supernatural thriller mash up. Anyway, I'm struggling with making a couple of my vampires seem 'sexy'. I'm going for the seductive temptress type for one of the characters and I just can't help but make the dialogue sound really corny and cliche. I want to go for the whole gothic seduction sort of vibe, does anybody have any tips?