Hi there .. I am still learning English and my writing skills are very poor .. wanted a help in punctuating the below sentence : I would like to welcome you to the new school year 2013 ( here ; to link or not ) wishing you and your family success and perosperity. Over the year, our school is working ( or was working? or has been working ? ) closely with parents to instil the value of culture in our children. Appreciate your help and thanks in advance . BB
Do I have to put the comma ? One more 2 questions : 1- After Finally what should I use ( , or ; ) like in : Finally ( ? ) I would like to thank you for your usual cooperation . 2- We are looking forward to ( or we look forward to ) leading your children through a wonderful experience . Thanks a lot