I'm writing a short story in the form of a monologue to be read on the radio and its a bit all over the place atm Its about a girl who wakes up in different clothes to what she went to bed in and her thoughts about how it happened and where the other clothes are etc. eventually she starts thinking what if this is just the beginning of things- what else have I done in my sleep? etc. In between all that there’s flash backs to what happened before she went to bed that night. I'm thinking it may have been her prom night? Or something like that where things seem to come to some sort of a conclusion. There’s a bit about each one of her friends who each represent a deadly sin. At the end she finds the old clothes covered in blood and its supposed to be like- she represents wrath/revenge/hatred and has.. got her revenge on her 'friends' Clearly I need help with this!! For a start do you think it would translate ok on radio?