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    should I quote someone in this situation?

    Discussion in 'Character Development' started by Eurlo, May 3, 2011.

    My main character(sazi)(pronounced: sa-say) is spying on another main character(foaghlore)(i know hard name it is pronounced: foe-lore) who is talking to a gravesite....should I quote what he says when he talks to the grave?
     
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    Is what he says important? Then yes. If it's not, then no. Simple...
     
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    I don't know, it is just talk...I don't think it is important....
     
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    I have to question why the spying character is spying on him then? If it's not important?
     
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    well Sazi was on his way to talk to Foaghlore...and happened to hear him talking to the grave....

    not really sure how to write out this part, can anyone post a example?
     
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    Lol sorry if that dialogue is completely out of character. I don't know your characters so I just improvised.
    Did you mean something like that?
    I hope that helped..
     
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    yeah thanks....thats actually really good thanks;) (i even have alittle sad song playing to get me into the emotional side of my story *swallows lump in throat....* this is going to be a good sad piece of my story:)

    Edit: I just finished the sad scene(well for now, might be one more sad scene) I can't wait to reveal a piece of my story...It is so awsome:D
     

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