Could someone please take a look at this paragraph and tell me what's off about this? John thought anything having to do with the occult was bullshit, especially witchcraft and Satanism. While discussing the Salem Witch Trials, his U.S. History teacher, Mr. Reynolds, said, “People practicing spells and rituals in the modern age are just misfits and castoffs of society. These folks are lacking in direction and need to find positive role models fast." During lunch, he told Devin what Mr. Reynolds said, but he could tell it had little effect.