K so if you've ever watched the anime puella magi modoka magica then you have a rough idea of how I want t start out my story. For those of you who have not seen this, let me explain some. The main character is asleep in what appears to be a dead city, there's no sound other than the wind which wails sadly through the lifeless streets. and then she can see it, the only two living souls, both men about a couple years older than her, (she's fifteen). one, a black haired man with pistols, and the other a blonde with swords. she doesn't understand what's going on, but as she watches them fight she slowly hears a voice in her head. This is close to when she would wake up. is starting with a dream a bad idea? is there anything I should start with in the dream to draw people in?