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    Subconcious writing experiment

    Discussion in 'Writing Prompts' started by OurJud, Sep 30, 2015.

    I'm sure I saw this elsewhere, but can't remember where.

    Anyway, the idea is to hit reply and immediately start typing without thinking for even a split second.

    Keep 'em short. I'll kick off.

    When grant foster is dark in the side of mister frank he isn't always a water in the far gone town of grenish. Turned off last week in the settlement so it's always the way forward and in the deep sink of death there is always a far-gone ernest...

    Had to stop there as I froze up and started to think.
     
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    So then, it doesn't have to tie into what you wrote?
     
  3. Aaron Smith

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    I don't want to get banned.
     
  4. OurJud

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    What who wrote? When?
     
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    ...desire to do more, and more until the end. No more then. Must stop. Then what? He doesn't know what next. He looks to the window not knowing. In the distance he sees it. The never ending dream of something half forgotten. No, it wasn’t there. Not that day. In the twilight it seemed lost and knew where it was. Together it would be good.
     
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    How come yours reads perfectly coherently and mine was utter bollocks?

    Where's Sigmund when you need him?
     
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    Mine reads like utter bollocks to me. I've no idea what it's about. I did fix the spellings before posting it though.
     
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    Every poppy field devoured all the limbs, fading into dark water, immortalized for all eternity.
     
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    That shit's dark :meh: ... Jesus, @OurJud I hope you have a counselor on hand for what you're stirring up.

    :p
     
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    If I could speak I'd be a mouthpiece, like I was before. Oh, look - there's a door. I want a bonfire and a S'more. Why does everything in my head rhyme? I'm out of time . . .
     
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    Ooh, this could be interesting... *clears throat*

    Today I am going to go to university but yesterday bugs snow it's not even winter because my subconscious scares me I didn't want pickles on my hamburger.

    Edit: Made text colour easier to read.
     
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    Yeah, you're pretty fucked up ...




    :brb:
     
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    I know, right? No wonder I keep killing off all of my characters ... :eek:
     

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