OK I know what I did wrong I just can't seem to figure out how to fix it. Any assistance is welcomed here. Bold words are where my issues are. A young man with long sable hair with just the hint of curl at its tips sat under a Banyan tree. His hair framing almond shaped eyes, eyes that when one gazed into their depths seemed to hold not only wisdom beyond his years but, total and utter peace. He has [wrong tense but if I write in Had it reads oddly to me.] the kind of eyes that laughed[B/] with him, or seemed to darken with his mood. (these last two I can change to laugh and drop the second half but then I think the whole things is just junk...) any thoughts here would really be loved. I have re worded this a few times with little luck. Maybe I'm just over thinking it here IDK anymore.