Btw, guys in Termir: There are 4 quarters to the city: The castle (crown square) looks over the lake, then there is the nobles quarter, the trade quarter, and the commoner's quarter. There is a small train station in the nobel's quarter and a large one in the trade quarter. The airship docks are in the trade quarter as well.
thenewpeter, if I could make a suggestion, when you post, would you mind splitting up paragraphs and lines? Might just be me, but I find it a little hard to read... So like instead of: " "Before he realised anything, Shara had grabbed his hand and twisted it, his smirk disappeared as he squealed. “Let me through” “You bitch!” " Could you make it: " Before he realised anything, Shara had grabbed his hand and twisted it, his smirk disappeared as he squealed. “Let me through” “You bitch!” " It'd help the post read smoother and cleaner. And I have a kitten! Masamune is going to be Bella's traveling companion from here on out
Alight my character intro is up and I have line of site of two other characters - and a kitten lol. Lucky for you Clairc loves cats.
Name: Clairc D. Ericks Race: CAT!!!! Age: 4 Sex: Male Appearance: Clairc has pointed ears, and black coat, and sharp claws. Equipment: Cat collar and bell Short bio: Sleeps, eats, uses litter box, repeat. Demeanor/Attitude: Agreeable when being pet, but gets upset if you don't feed him.
I don't know if I have enough time to post right now! I'll try, but it might have to wait. I promise I have something up tonight though! btw all the posts are fantastic so far, I'm super excited!!
Question- When should I do my next post? Do I want for everyone else to go before before I do another one or should I just do it when I see fit without going overboard? Or if my character is acted upon do I do something in response? A brief explanation or link to a post that explains would help me out boatloads.
AHHHHHH!!! Forgotten beat me! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Ahem. I'm posting my thing anyway! Alright! Time for Super-FUN-Time lessons with Honorius! *Applause* Alright, so basically, you can post whenever. The only time you would wait to post is if you're waiting on another character to interact with you or the environment. So, for instance, lets say I'm talking with your character. We can keep talking as much as we want. It's fine if there's ten posts of just us talking in between other posts. Basic idea: Post as much as you want! Just be sure to wait for others if you're interacting with them.
I've just noticed one mistake. The dark elf put his blind fold on and then was 'seeing' me and the hooded figure on the airship. Anyway, I'm going to sleep. I hope there are more posts by the time I wake up. People on the airship, it might be a bit boring at the moment, but after my post tomorrow, I promise it will pick up.
That would be spam! Which has been reported already. So Cogito (He's like the police chief of the forums) will be around soon and delete that. Of course, he's not a fan of talking about spam, so these posts about the spam might get deleted. In short, ignore the spam.
Haha, you're right. I just realized that. I just excited to post and did it fast without checking it. Sorry, what happen again.
Hope you don't mind I did a little tiny tiny bit of controlling your character Honorius- a simple handshake. I will try to avoid doing it in the future.
Brandogg! You have a knack for description and detail! I compliment you on that. Good job! And I would post know, but its past midnight over here, and I'm not one to stay up very late Ahh! I wrote all that out for nothing! Well, you can still read it if you'd like. I'm not erasing it. Anyway, I'm okay with the handshake, just be sure not to get into a habit of that. But good job in realizing it's not a thing that's always okay! (The part that's no longer really needed) One thing though. See how you wrote: "and despite the grimy look of it the woman shook her hand without so much as a second thought."? You were correct in assuming that Bella would do just that. However, try to refrain from that in the future. See, in your post you had a character that isn't yours or under your control do something. That's know as god modding. Now, this was very minor, just a handshake. But if my character was different, or if Bella had contempt for the lower classes, she might NOT shake your characters hand. And then we have a problem. Bella would have shaken the hand anyway, and youre a rookie of sorts, so don't worry about it, but be wary of that in the future, okay?
I got you man, I got you. Yeah, still a beginner here. I will definitely take what you have said into consideration and will not do it again. Thank you for your input and for your patience here with a rookie- and for the hell of it I changed it so I didn't make your character act. I like to fix my mistakes if possible
It works perfectly! Grr at the spam! I think everyone's posted now. I'm going to move it along very shortly. Edit: Just added a little more for interaction - story will move along later today.
Hey, Brandogg, would you be so kind as to give me permission to have Noveen hand Bella her weapons one at a time for her to inspect? I'd just let you do that in the next post, but like this we can begin to move towards Claric's shop sooner, and therefore be a bit closer to the action.
