I'm trying to make my first paragraph very exciting and have a great hook. It's not turning out to what I thought it would. Please help me make it better. I lay, quietly on the grass with my fists clinched ready for some action. I was very angry due to lack of sleep and drama at school. What can you do when the preppy girls spread stuff about you. I for sure need to fix What can you do when the preppy girls spread stuff about you. I really need suggestions. Please help. I would like to add stuff or to revise stuff. ANYTHING!