Yeah, I messed up. I like your paragraph, it is kind of appealing - though I reckon you might pad out the prose a little bit more, imagining yourself as a wise old man in the narration. Apologies for busybody behaviour, but: [blah, blah]...a problem quickly [rapidly] arose. All life just grew, and evolved, nothing died. Planets became overcrowded [with a strangle of base vegetation...visual imagery please]. Survival of the fittest lost its [all] meaning,[ .] It it was now Survival of the numerically superior...[blah blah] A Mass of [dis?]unorganized organisms animated chaos upon the solar system as vines crept through the ionspheres, foul beanstalks united for eternity in a scribble where planets cried molten tears, lava dripped from the sun [bleh bleh]. These, their final sobs that echoed through the quite space, unheralded upon the barren faces of dark asteroids, the new masters, heh heh, bone, throw me a bone, I GO FETCH. Sorry, I'm playing editor, it is my fetish. BTW, your usage of animated is most excellent. You have an exciting idea - hence my meddling, it's a good sign.