I have a section of a short story where a character is explaining something to another character who is falling in and out of consciousness. Would anyone have any suggestions as to how to portray this with the characters dialogue. I currently have it trailing off in ellipsis, would this be considered correct? “I know very well, you are correct, my intention is not to steal it.” Jackson replies. “We stick to the plan, that plan being… Jackson trails off as Spencer begins to black out again. The gash in his head begins to bleed again, the hit from Jackson must have aggravated it. Spencer’s vision blurs as he passes out the last of Jackson’s words descend into the darkness and the re-enter his minds eye under a different voice. He sees the broadcast delivered just a month earlier. Any insights would be great, thanks.