Hello, all! Since few of you know me yet, I'll include a brief bit about myself and my novel to give a more complete picture....I do realize this is NOT the introductions forum, and so I will be brief. Please bear with me. I have been writing for about ten years, and of those years, 5 of them have been spent writing only for school projects, and 5 have been spent developing my fantasy writings. That being said, this is the first novel I've ever tried to write, and I'm a little nervous. The plot is that a group of people, (see my post in Character Development), form a society in which they feel they can create perfection. In order to hide from the world, and aid in their quest, they each have magical powers, or talents. Below is a brief outline of what I think will be an engaging storyline for them. Please Critique, and remember, I'm pretty new to this, so be gentle. Part One: Introductions Introduce the Gifts Introduce the Characters Group formation through the years Quest for better things Picking of friends Part Two: Getting Started Finding a Place Building Good Bye Cruel World Formation of Rule Part Three: Begin the Game First test of rule
First of all, this part of the site does not permit posting for critique. Please read the site rules. Second, a plot outline cannot be critiqued. It is only a concept. Critique applies to how an idea is expressed.
