I've been thinking...what's the greatest plot twist you've ever read? I need some help with my twist. And below, in white coloring (highlight my post to read it) is my stories spoiler. In The Making of... Nothing I've decided to implant a dramatic and risky twist. The characters are currently at the hotel, as far as I've written. Now I'm going to get the MC and six other characters arrested. Then the action fast forwards to the MC and his three best male friends, in jail....but I don't know if I set up the story right for such a dramatic main setting. Could someone read it and see if I could successfully use the twist with minimal rewriting?