Maybe I am over thinking it. Maybe not. Okay context. Let's see if I can do it on the first try. lol. My MC suffered a tragedy; watching her son(age 10) executed. She snapped in response and killed the killers in that moment. She never became well after this. There is a certain transition I am worried about. Because of super natural reasons she has a high life span. I was thinking of her kind of drifting and killing people that reminded her of what she lost. Though I think the beginning of this is in the memory of her son. I think there is a point where that shifts. She stops trying to remember and begins trying to forget. The way I am writing the scene now sort of involves her getting progressively angry until reaching a boiling point; at which time she kills someone she was working with. I saw her just laughing after doing this. Like this entire time she was breaking and this was it. The moment she was now officially insane. The moment she forgot her son, the moment she stopped thinking about good or evil. The moment she just became a body in motion seeking instant gratification. Does this seem valid? Anything feel wrong here? What kind of time jump do you think is valid here? One friend suggested 50 years of it boiling over. Is that too long though? Thank you.