I love you guys' feedback. In my novel, I feel like it would really help the story if I use internal monologue and allow the readers to hear the characters thoughts and see into their mind. This is my first novel ive written so i have questions. 1) Even though there is one clear MC, is it alright (or preferred even) to be able to see into the minds of the other characters as well? Both the good guys and the bad guys? 2) I suppose you would use the tags "She thought, he thought, etc" every single time? and so that would mean that thoughts are put in quotations just like regular dialogue?