Alright, well my plot for this story I'm writing involves people from some worlds ending up in other worlds, whether from old young or middle age, they end up in another world where they do not belong. whether they know it or not, they will still sense it deep down inside on a primal level, that they do not belong. there are those though, that send these people back to their correct world, beings created simply to fix the anomolies of the universes. So for the first book I was going to go with a simpler plot. there's a guy, average in appearance though somewhat smart, he's in a world very similar to ours, but one day one of the beings comes for him, sending him against his will to the world he was meant to be born in, and trapping him there. This world is nothing like ours. in this world, people weild power called mantra a natural life force that flows within everyone and everything in this world. So I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions for me or any kind of tips or suggestions.