Hi, everybody. I'm new to this, so humor me. I've got a basic outline to a story, but I'm wondering what I could add to it to really make it great? Here's the basic plot: A girl grows up in a family of 11 children, all from a drug-addicted mother. Needless to say, their childhood leaves a lot to be desired, and they end up on the streets until child services steps in. The 11 children are all split up, most at a young age. Basically, the story follows the actions of the sixth child, a girl named Tiereney. She's severley depressed, and pretty much the definition of cruel and soulless. She ends up running into her oldest brother, and the story follows their adventure into bringing their family back together, and rediscovering themselves. I've already managed to squeeze a love story in there, too. But at this point, I'm wondering if that's enough. Not to mention I need a title. Advice?