Unnatural Campus Discussion

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  1. Nothingness

    Nothingness Active Member

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    I have a feeling Will won't take that all too well...
     
  2. Ishnorb

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    Alright, could I get a time of day on the island? Just so I don't post it and then am inaccurate.

    By looking at the posts, i'm assuming its around the time of evening? (Good guess, wrong answer?)
     
  3. mmarage

    mmarage The Detective Contributor

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    I believe so.
     
  4. Ishnorb

    Ishnorb Member

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    Oh, thanks mmarage. However I just posted without giving distinct definition of the time of day. :p

    But I greatly appreciate your response/answer. :-D
     
  5. Ishnorb

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    Speaking of my first post, y'all like it? Anyone have any advice? Things comment on or encourage?
     
  6. mmarage

    mmarage The Detective Contributor

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    You're welcome, and I think it's fine for an opening post, you'll also likely be able to get into the action soon once Mikkish and the others leave the dorm, it's a group of people that would likely get his attention, especially since he's bored and looking for something interesting, oh yes, one last thing to note, there is a crime scene outside of the school, burnt tree, just thought I'd let ya know.
     
  7. Nothingness

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    Hey, if you guys could tell me what you think of my posts, writing-wise, I'd be grateful. :)

    And if you'd like me to do the same all you need is ask.
     
  8. TheApprentice

    TheApprentice Senior Member

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    I personally enjoy your writing style. It makes the post more interesting.
     
  9. mmarage

    mmarage The Detective Contributor

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    I think you should write however you like, I personally like your writing style.
     
  10. Ishnorb

    Ishnorb Member

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    Been a little bit since I RP'ed so i'll get less rusty with each post.

    However would like to say, am enjoying everyone else's posts. :-D
     
  11. TheApprentice

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    Just so Ishnorb and Nothngness understand whats going on, there have been a few murders in the city and Mikkish is determined to catch him.
     
  12. Nothingness

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    Yeah I got that.

    Even if that means tackling every other guy in the vicinity :p
     
  13. Ishnorb

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    Theos watches a random person he encounters tackle someone proclaiming their a killer.

    Theos believes life here will be an interesting one to say the least. XD
     
  14. Nothingness

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    I clear my throat "Ah hem..."
     
  15. Ishnorb

    Ishnorb Member

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    I tend to make mistakes with homophones frequently. More so in discussion threads or chat-rooms then anything.

    But never said I was the best XP
     
  16. Nothingness

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    I was trying to ignore it... trying not to correct you, it's just... it makes me cringe everytime one of those...

    Sorry.
     
  17. Ishnorb

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    It's all right, I understand. :-D

    I'll try to keep a better eye on it, so you cringe less!
     
  18. Nothingness

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    :)

    Pronoun trouble. Like Daffy and Bugs.

    The no edit after X thing is a bit inconvenient.

    Especially when you miss so many words and switch pronouns as I do...
     
  19. TheApprentice

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    Alright guys, no auto hitting the cops. This is sort of a boss fight.
     
  20. Ishnorb

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    Things are getting wild!
     
  21. mmarage

    mmarage The Detective Contributor

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    Joe - the voice of reason that everyone ignores. XD
     
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  22. Ishnorb

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    Theos doesn't enjoy the idea of blindly following johnny law. o.o
     
  23. mmarage

    mmarage The Detective Contributor

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    And Joe doesn't enjoy the idea of fighting Johnny Law. XD
     
  24. Nia

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    Well Johnny Law can be corrupt as hell on the streets or at night sometimes. This just is one of those times. XD
     
  25. mmarage

    mmarage The Detective Contributor

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    Yeah... but it's not worth it when Johnny Law has about thirty cops out there all looking to kick your asses or just shoot you up when they get a sob story about being attacked with absolutely no provocation. XD
     

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