When using the Plot Development sub-forum, remember to have specific questions in mind. Posts to the tune of "Is this plot believable/interesting?" give the forum members little to go off of when responding since every plot is believable/interesting when executed by a deft hand. Also it is useful to give members the background information they need to answer your question - what is the over arching plot you are developing? What is the genre? What and when is the setting? Who are your key characters? and so on. You don't need to write War and Peace but a few lines of context goes a long way to making it easier for members to give you pertinent advice When responding to posts in this area, remember that even the most experienced and knowledgeable of us started at the beginning. Please be constructive in your answers and address the question. In other words, respond the way you would like to be responded to, had the question been your own.