When using the Plot Development sub-forum, remember to have specific questions in mind. Posts to the tune of "Is this plot believable/interesting?" give the forum members little to go off of when responding since every plot is believable/interesting when executed by a deft hand. When responding to posts in this area, remember that even the most experienced and knowledgeable of us started at the beginning. Please be constructive in your answers and address the question. In other words, respond the way you would like to be responded to, had the question been your own.