Mine too. Today was my last day of classes, and my finals appear to be easy. Here's to good wishin' for ya! *Raises drink*
Thanks Lydia! Although I'm a bit stuck with my story. I want one of two things: 1) Mister Wilkins calls Colin up to serve a drink to a mysterious guest. End of Ch. 1 2) One of the tavern workers show up and tells Colin about the guest. Colin investigates. End of Ch. 1
Hmm, both sound like they could make interesting endings... it's up to you what to choose - I wouldn't know it.
Hee hee! XD Well, I'm just glad to be finally done with chapter one. The last sentence may need work, but what I have now is a LOT better than it was before. (Before, Mister Wilkins got involved in a fight that erupted out of nowhere, and I honestly felt it was too early for that.) One of my concerns are that Colin says, "Oh, Mister Wilkins is a nice guy! Really, he is!" yet in chapter one, I've painted Mr. Wilkins to be a blunt, harsh man who HATES the French and who managed to upset a French lady who works there. (He has his reasons= French and Indian War)
And I feel like the parsnip that fell off the wagon along with your turnip which was also run over by a cart drawn by a water buffalo. The cart wheel and the water buffalo each did their bit. :redface:
I don't want to know that group, Xee. Wrey...tell me about it. Hmm...Water buffalo...reminds me of silly songs with Larry the cucumber.