1. Forsaken

    Forsaken New Member

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    Welcome to a World of Depravity

    Discussion in 'New Member Introductions' started by Forsaken, Jan 5, 2007.

    Hello everyone...

    Not even completely sure if I am in the correct place to post my particular taste of poetry, but, I'll give it a try.

    All I am really looking for is a little feedback, maybe a generous comment or two.. hints, tips, suggestions. Be as brutal as you like.. no one gets any better if everyone who critiques your work is nice, right?

    Anyhow, if you have a taste for the darkside of human nature, give my pieces a view.. happy reading.


    You'll get honesty here fromother members critique. :)

    Welcome to the forum.




    ~Raven.
     
  2. DFischer

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    Hey there, new here myself. I can get pretty brutal on critiques, so I'll check out your stuff asap. :)
     
  3. Daniel

    Daniel I'm sure you've heard the rumors. Founder Staff Contributor

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    Heya, welcome to the site. Hope you enjoy it here.
     
  4. ariella

    ariella New Member

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    Welcome to the forum, hope you enjoy it.
     
  5. Raven

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    Welcome to the forum.



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  6. newguy

    newguy New Member

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    ah the darkness...
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    i've read your poem here already
    and all I can say is that it is excellent
    welcome aboard F
     

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