Okay, so I'm about a quarter of a way through with my novel. One of my friends is helping me out and telling me what she thinks as I go along. We were discussing my plans on how the story should progress, and she said it would seem like I went off track if I did what I'm planning. Anyway, the story has three main characters, a girl and two guys. The girl has been thrown into a three-thousand year relationship with Guy 1(an incubus), but she doesn't remember him (she was involved with him in a past life and had trapped him in a castle in the Otherworld). Meanwhile, she's falling for Guy 2, who is basically Guy 1's slave. I want the girl to end up with Guy 2, but my friend said that it would make it seem like I went off on a tangent and forgot about the original plot, because the beginning was kind of all about Guy 1. Does it seem like I'm straying from the original plot? Please tell me if I made no sense in this post.