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  1. Lotgrinder

    Lotgrinder Member

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    What's sounds better.....

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Lotgrinder, Apr 2, 2013.

    "From the bottom of my heart, thank you for giving me a few minutes of your time."

    or

    "Thank you from the bottom of my heart, for giving me a few minutes of your time."

    "I hope to God I can entertain you and that perhaps you'll find enough value in my stories to keep paying me a dollar for them."

    or

    "I hope to God that I am entertaining you and that you'll find my stories worth a dollar."

    Thanks in advance for helping me out.
     
  2. GingerCoffee

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    What's? That means, "What is sounds better." :confused:

    "From the bottom of my heart, I thank you for giving me a few minutes of your time."


    "I hope to God that I am entertaining you and that you'll find my stories worth a the dollar you've paid."
     
  3. Lotgrinder

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    Running on 4 hours sleep, sorry about the typo in the title.

    TYTY for your suggestion though.
     
  4. GingerCoffee

    GingerCoffee Web Surfer Girl Contributor

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    Been there, even when I've had plenty of sleep. ;)

    I thought maybe you were an ESL writer rather than a 'typo'ist or I might have worded that comment differently. :)
     

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