I am confused about when you should end a sentence. I also want to know how you can write a long one that is acceptable. I have seen some long sentences in works that are praised, and I like long sentences. But when I posted a long sentence in my other thread, it was criticized because the thoughts did not flow. So my question is, how do I know when I should end a sentence and begin a new one? And how can I write a really long sentence without meriting criticism?