I'm trying to rewrite something and here's the issue: or I think the second one follows the active voice, but somehow the first one seems to sound a little better? Thanks in advance
Thanks guys for the response! One more question about active vs. passive. Would this sentence be in the active voice? Magazine cut-outs covered the walls and ceiling. vs The walls and ceiling were covered in magazine cut-outs
Magazine cut-outs covered the walls and ceiling = active voice. To understand if a sentence is active, you must ask yourself if the agent that does the action is in the sentence. The cup was spilled? = passive, who spilled the cup? The cup was spilled by whom? = passive, for the agent was added in with a prepositional phrase. Who spilled the cup? = active
Note the presence of the auxilliary verb were, derived from the verb to be. This is the usual indicator of passive voice.