I'm wondering if you would care for Victor, who has a big part to play. He been in prison once, he's rather tormented about his past, but he wanted to move on. He lived in New York for a while but soon after, he had to LA and since then he life hasn't been great. He is sick in the head, he thinks nothing of the world and against society. I want him to be able to change but he needs to want to do that. He has an interesting relationship with one of the Detective. So I could expands on that a fair bit couldn't I? I want the reader to feel for him and show to be tormented.