I got one review so far, but no suggestions--- don't get me wrong, I LOVE what Mallory said, but one person's opinion (besides my own) is not thorough enough to get a "feel" for how people are taking my work. At the time of this posting it had been viewed 73 times--- only one review. It hurts! Please check it out here: https://www.writingforums.org/showthread.php?t=38052
