Hello everyone! I ask for your thoughts before I move too far forward with my current novel idea. At this point I have two MCs and several supporting characters, with time changes and it's starting to get slightly confusing, so I'm also looking for any thoughts on how to show the flow of time a little better. Now, onto the main point. One of the main characters is your average man, nothing too spectacular about him, he's pursing the woman he meets at his work. The other MC is a serial killer, but he is a split personality (haven't decided if he's from a different character, or if he's the split of the other MC). What I'm curious about is if this is worth writing a full novel about? Obviously I know a lot is going to hang on my writing for if it's successful in what I'm trying to convey, but in your opinion would you read something like this? I'm currently sitting at around 20,000 words and it's getting difficult, I want to finish it on one hand, but the other hand I have a million other things I could be writing as well. I realize this is probably a difficult answer for most of you because you haven't read any (I plan to post up a short chapter once I can post to the workshop) but going off of no knowledge, where someone says the mc is a serial killer, would it be something you would consider reading? Thank's in advance for your thoughts and any suggestions!