Hey guys, I struggle a bit with writing action, or maybe my struggle is in my head... What do you think of the following paragraph? 'A shot rang out. “Hey buddy, we got a couple of uglies coming our way.” Two more shots. “Actually, make that a lot of uglies. Mate, we gotta go now!”' or 'They lurched in their seats as the Ute hit the zombies with full brunt. Zombies flew over the bonnet, and smashed into the ground. Blood streaked the windows, reducing their visibility to almost nothing. Thomas felt something clutch at his shirt and he looked down to see a mangled hand reaching through his window. The zombie that owned the hand was missing half the flesh on his face from the impact but he clung on with fierce determination.' Thanks!