Hi everyone, I'm new to this site, so I hope I'm posting this in the right place. I've been trying to write a novel series for quite some time now, but I have two major issues. The first issue is that my subject matter leans more towards young-adult/adult fiction, but my writing tone feels more like preteen fiction and I'm not sure what I can do to work on that. The second issue is that I tend to give the reader too much explanation for things all at once rather than leaving something to the imagination. I know it's better to tease the ideas first, but I always feel the need to fully explain or describe something, even though it's unnecessary. Does anybody have any suggestions or tips? And is there somewhere that I can post fragments of my story so that people can give me feedback with these issues in mind?